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OC Vega Injured-Shade by =Double-G:iconDouble-G:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

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Artist's Comments

2 days to finish this dirty art.

I get help from Afatarra and :icondreadman110: to draw Vega's body. Afatarra created rough sketch (anatomy), I fix it and add muscle. And then Dreadman-senpai help me to fix my muscle.

I know I'm not good in creating background. Thats why I learn again. So sorry for many mistakes

This time I use another technique to using my pencil color. I dont know how to explain in English. It "pulasan" and no lineart technique. Sharpen my pencil color put on paper and use my finger like use pastel color

TOO BAD I ONLY HAVE 12 COLOR!!!!!!!

I need more color T_T

C&C are welcome

Btw he is Vega my OC when he still at First year at Senior High school. He got injured after fighting with Batara's gang. He sitting on alley (thx for help me Rairy-san).

Hope U like it

EDIT

I add more dark shade on this art. Thank you for all suggestion. How about it?

Tools
1. Water color pencil 12 color T_T

Critiques


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~cosu May 9, 2009, 11:39:39 PM
bahasa indo aja ya maap ^^; in my opinion aja ok, gw banyakan otodidak jd liad gbr brdasarkan insting aja lol

- hmm mnurut gw, warna nya agak tralu colorful utk nuansa gambarnya, abis brantem kan ya? mungkin color tone/palette nya cocoknya lebi gelap lg, mungkin banyak2 dicampur warna abu2. ky tembokny & kaca jendela (ato itu bolongan y?), munkgin kl aga grey-ish lebi oke, tembok agak tralu pink n mencolok, aksennya jd membaur (bukan k characternya)

- pnegasan dimensi kurang..outline kali ya, d bagian perbatasan karakter ama BG nya mungkin bagusnya lebi tebel dikit (kyk garis pipa)

- tembok bata nya krg natural, mungkin krg ada sentuhan debu2/retakan, soalnya biasanya kan ada. saran gw si jgn tralu penggaris outline buat bata nya n kardus nya :) (kesannya jadi keraaas banget gt :XD:)

- perspektif chara n BG nya aga beda, kl dr mata gw..chara nya tmpak samping, pmandanganny agak 3/4 atas, tp kl dipratiin skilas sih gk tralu engeh jg kok.

+ proporsi body oke, warna rambut, expresi n pose jg oke.

+ hehe ktny cm pake 12 warna y? mantep bo, jd harus sibuk campur2 warna ya :XD: gw ngerti gmn susah nya pake pensilwarna yg colorny terbates haha *itu yg bikin gw males pke pensilwarna lg ^^;

oke, overall dah mayan. duh ga ngerti jg pensil warna ^^; maap yak kl kritik kbykn, udah amatir banyak bacot haha *kaburrrr* :sprint:
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~Arthur-on-IkArisa May 9, 2009, 7:14:47 AM
tapi masih rapi kok, mantep :D

mungkin kurang shading aja ya, tapi ini dah keren banget kok, saya ga bisa make pensil warna soalnya ^^'

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*stayka May 9, 2009, 7:21:06 AM
Looks like you put quite some time into the pencil colouring! IMO the pic lacks still a little detail, though. I think you coloured everything a bit too smoothly and thus it doesn't look as dirty and worn down as you intended. But still not bad at all :)

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*rairy May 9, 2009, 7:21:22 AM
You're doing fine with BG. I think 'lorong' is 'alley' in English.

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=Double-G May 9, 2009, 7:24:07 AM
ahahaha yes Alley. Why I forgot that vocab. thank you

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=Double-G May 9, 2009, 7:26:33 AM
my first coloring is pencil color. lol
I want to put many detail esp on wall. But the perspective always wrong. Thats why I remove all of it (AC, wire, etc)
ah I need to gain my courage to put more dark color as shadow. eheh I always afraid put shadow on my art ^^
thank you for Ur suggestion.

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=Double-G May 9, 2009, 7:27:23 AM
shading is my weakness (lalalalala Nyanyi geje) weheheh

warnanya cm 12 booo
Biru cm 2. Muda ama tua. Parah ga ad warna kulit. T_T pake oranye kuning coklat dah akhirnya
grrrr

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*rairy May 9, 2009, 7:28:53 AM
you're welcome XD

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~Arthur-on-IkArisa May 9, 2009, 7:30:35 AM
tapi tetep keren, drpd wa ga bs make pensil warna ^^'

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*stayka May 9, 2009, 8:32:09 AM
Indeed. A little more courage with using shadows would have been beneficial. But I'm sure you will consider that for the next pic!

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